i may not tell u wat i have done in a day, but something i wan to share with u all..so i came here...today i wrote something..juz read it:)
阳光照射的角度
是你我走过的路线
微风拂过的树梢
还映出我们并肩的身影
当天边绽开一朵软软的云
便会投射出一扇蓝蓝的门
那是早已封尘的笑脸
眼神和坚持
曾经默契是最宝贵的语言
但黄昏来时
却隐没在浮云里
我突然觉得悲伤
提笔开始刻画记忆里你的声线
仿佛刚在耳边响起
却像昨天般遥远
短讯里空白的部分
是你的沉默
你是流星
稍纵即逝 多么灿烂
我的月亮
还在原地 静静微笑
让时间为我替你送行
在十字路口
踏上各自的明天
u can tell me any comment,such as story(haha), ur feeling after reading it,or u think how can write it better,or whether u can understand it..anything la...ok? thanks :)
hmm......
ReplyDeletesuch depth.....
dun la b so sad....
it's bound 2 happen sometime...
important thing is tat v rmb d good times 2gether.....
Hey hobaodan!!Your poem not bad eh,if got time explaine to me please..i cant understand the message there..haha..
ReplyDeleteTell you a story here..long long time ago,when pencil wasn't invented yet,there was a man..That man was tall n dark..He used to walk with his right leg front first then left..One day, he start with his left leg..Well, you might guess something has gone wrong..Nah..You're wrong,there's nothing weird for a person to walk either left or right leg first..Haha..Okay..Story goes on..That man work hard everyday searching for sand in the woods..It's not an easy job as sand as you all know,can only be found at the beach or dessert..Unless there's a shop selling sand in the woods,he surely wont get any..and guess what,he did found sand in the woods,not from the shop..You must be dumb to sell sand in woods rite?..How he got the sand doesn't really matter as that's no big deal to this story..okay..So he get sand everyday from the woods..Don't bother what does he do with does sand,it's juz a story n he does tat for living..Gosh..I left out the name...His name was Thomas..Thomas Alva Edison..The man who invented the airplane..once he like to sit below the apple tree,but he always got hit on the head by falling apples..So he tricked his pal,Newton to sit under that tree..He must be nuts now,wont you if an apple keep on hitting ur head?..Some heard bout that newton guy keep on mumbling bout the law of gravity..oh god..go to the court if you want to talk bout law,dun go to the university where smart ppl are...So..back to our hero,thomas,the guy who invented the airplane..Thomas was a special inventor,not like others who failed many time..Einstein his neighbour failed 14 times trying to invent the telephone,abraham lincoln failed to invent the car,which lead to his suicide,and george bush failed to invent the perfect underwear to cover his but as he's such an asshole...Thomas,our hero,success in one try..He doesn't need to build or draw..He just say:"if you guys are dumb enuf to read what i type,then u guys must be dumb enuf to believe i invented the airplane.."
haha..too free..sorry..next time i free i tell u other story..cheer up la yuhe!!
haha!!! i didnt read wat u type, but only read the anonymous dumb story... now i only realize how dumb am i ><"
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